Animal Rights: A Critique to Andy Carloff's article :'Our Fellow Creatures'

In his article 'Our Fellow Creatures', Andy Carloff fights for animals' rights. The issue of animal injustice is real and fighting for animal rights is a current interest. Carloff is right in stating that people should start treating animals humanely, but the arguments he employs in his discussion are controversial and scarce. In his article Carloff aims to convince the reader that animals should be granted rights. He starts by stating how animals are being …showed first 75 words of 905 total…

…showed last 75 words of 905 total…conclusion, for example, provides new ideas and has no referral to what has been discussed in the other paragraphs of the article. All in all, the discussion, although an essential one, is weak and feeble. Support and evidence as well as elaborating on the main idea are missing. However, despite its weakness, the article helps increase the reader's awareness of animals' deplorable situation in addition to pushing him into fighting animal injustice and taking action.