Cold Shadows (GCSE original writing)

The shadows were lengthening now. I could see the sun slowly creeping down behind a mountain. In a few minutes the whole valley would be in shade. I shivered and looked round nervously, trying not to think of the prospect of spending a night on this desolate mountain. As I turned to look behind me a sharp pain shot up through my leg like an electric shock. I winced. I knew there was no way …showed first 75 words of 1193 total…

…showed last 75 words of 1193 total…the mountains. The stars began to slowly diminish. Not long after the morning sun began to reach us. I could feel it warming my skin. We both stopped and sat down on a nearby rock, and there right below us was a small cluster of tents barely noticeable. I looked round at the person next to me but he had gone. All I could see were the long shadows of the rocks all around me.