Poem called Cold in the Earth, notes on ideas, themes.

Cold in the Earth Poem is based on remembrance No regular pattern in the first line, chaotic, gloomy. The word deep is a plosive, exhaling of breath. Symbolizes truly dead, out of the way.. finished as is the same with the word piled. Piled also adds magnitude. Not only is he dead but so Is everything around him. Repetition from the first line. Removed from life, her, material objects. "Far, Far" reachable, something has happened …showed first 75 words of 453 total…

…showed last 75 words of 453 total…but can't. Internal conflict. Darker hopes, oxymoron. Beset- take control of. Things are greater than I can control. Attatched- gives weight to expectations of her. Obscure, prevent her from remembering. Fade his memory. List, prayer of 2 lines of 'fact' yet both metaphors of light. No days no light any more he meant so much to her. "Her life is over" over-dramatic? To make up for her guilt hr life has gone with his. "Thee" self-pity?